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Robblink I am a copywriter in New York City, always looking for the best ads

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  • Dabitch's picture
    Dabitch

    Hehehehehe - well the funeral setting is spot on the same - his joy over the uninhabitable swamp-land is the new twist. cute.

    May 06, 2003
  • Laters's picture
    Laters

    hmmm, now that you mention it.

    May 06, 2003
  • AnonymousCoward's picture
    AnonymousCoward (not verified)

    Nice twist indeed, but WHY the "terrible!" comments from his sister and brother and WHY WHY! the "yeeehaw" from him and WHY! WHY! WHY! all that car driving around in the swamp.

    I would have loves it if he had just clenched his fist and muttered a quit "yes!" like he had hoped to inherit the swamp and the a cut to the logo. Then I would have imagined him/me driving around there inside my head. Good idea, ruined in bad execution.

    Jesper

    May 07, 2003

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